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I Couldn't Kiss You by ~AquartistJames:iconAquartistJames:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Sitting with you on that stone bench
I felt things I’ve never felt before.
The sun setting on a perfect day,
You took my hand and smiled at me,
And asked my permission to kiss me.
Who does that anymore?
But it was sweet, and I love you for that.
You should’ve just done it though –
I was so nervous I couldn’t do it.
It didn’t matter how much I wanted to.
I watched you smile
And knew you could read my mind.
And so I asked you, my patient angel,
“Could we hold hands just a bit longer?”
©2008-2010 ~AquartistJames
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Author's Comments

More words from my heart... :)

Again, for my special friend with whom I visited the Kimbell. Yesterday was a turning point in my life I think... I hope... and somehow I know...

For Miller

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~XxLonesomeDovexX Aug 9, 2008, 6:55:10 PM
Aw, that's a sweet poem.
I like it very much :D

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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.

~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
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~AquartistJames Aug 9, 2008, 6:57:38 PM
Thank you. :)

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Mood: Love ~Phoenician-Roses Aug 9, 2008, 7:33:55 PM
cuuuute! lol

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~AquartistJames Aug 9, 2008, 7:36:38 PM
In real life it was extremely awkward, actually.

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,___, ,___,
[¬.¬] [O.o] - Eep.
/)__) /)__)
-"--"---"--"-
Dirty Owl says shocking things.
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~Phoenician-Roses Aug 9, 2008, 8:34:19 PM
but you put it so nicely that it couldn't possibly be so lol jk =P

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~AquartistJames Aug 10, 2008, 11:12:12 AM
Believe me, it was. Never been more awkward with someone, but it was still extremely sweet. :)

--
,___, ,___,
[¬.¬] [O.o] - Eep.
/)__) /)__)
-"--"---"--"-
Dirty Owl says shocking things.
:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
~XxLonesomeDovexX Aug 11, 2008, 9:55:25 AM
ur welcome :D

--
it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.

~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
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~Spartenas-dream Aug 17, 2008, 4:35:46 PM
wow... i can only imagine. this is wrote very well :)
i could see what was going on.
its very sweet ^^
nice work
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~AquartistJames Aug 17, 2008, 4:53:50 PM
Haha thanks. :)

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,___, ,___,
[¬.¬] [O.o] - Eep.
/)__) /)__)
-"--"---"--"-
Dirty Owl says shocking things.
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